淡淡碎叶

由于国家哀悼日而推迟的美文翻译大赛，今日火热开始啦！！
本期汉译英的内容如下：
             我们在地狱边上 但是我们没有颤抖
        这是黑色的日子，所有的孩子，所有的成人。。。。。所有的中国人，都处在强烈的震惊和悲伤中。
        在这样悲剧性的日子里，我们需要暂时的把目光从身边移开，向广袤的西部远望。我们将真切的感觉到，在被群山阻隔的地方有灾区同胞的存在，而不是像平日一样的忽略他们。废墟下苍白的面容，血泊里一双双挣扎的手，经没日没夜的盘旋在我们的脑际。
我们需要行动，需要通过各种方式送去我们的爱。中国红十字会等官方捐款渠道已经开启，媒体主持的捐款行动也在陆续的推出。我们也可以选择自己信任的民间渠道。对重大灾难的救助是人道义务，超越了国家的范畴，跟我们每个人相关。
        可以确信，这是中国30年来遭遇的最严重的地震灾害，多个城市瞬间即已夷为平地，把灾区现场称作人间地狱也决无丝毫过分。由于整个灾区的通讯和交通普遍中断，焦灼中的人们无法确知更多的情况。
       但这并不意味着我们只能陷入无所作为的恐惧之中，并不能证明文明是无能的，而只是证明文明的发展是一个永无止境的过程，证明这个国家在此时此刻尤为需要文明的核心：人类的善良，信心和无畏的精神。
       我们正在尽力保持乐观。在灾难处理和平复中出现严重错失是不可想象的。我们期望天有慈悲，人有作为，救援顺利。我们希望救援加速，原有更多人生还。
祈愿灾难中的人们平安，在这段多风多雨的日子里，我们以忧伤之情，信念之心，原吾国吾民平安。
有点难度哦，希望大家积极踊跃参加，以跟帖的形式发表在本主题后面既可，奖励多多！大家一起来提高英语水平吧！


[ 本帖最后由 淡淡碎叶 于 2008-5-27 14:31 编辑 ]

淡淡碎叶

我们怀着悲痛的心，让我们安静的说，中国加油。为了祖国的强大，也要被迫学好英文。

penny

We are in the edge of hell but we did not tremble

         This is a dark day, all the children, all adults. . . . . All the Chinese people, are in a strong shock and sorrow.

         In the tragic days, we need temporarily to move away our eyes to the vast western. We will feel really that in the mountains where the barrier is the existence of the disaster areas compatriots, instead of ignoring them as usual. The pale face under the ruins, the struggle hands in blood, all these are circled the morimoye day and night.

        We need action and must through various means to send our love. The China Red Cross Society and other official channels contributions have been opened, the media also have contributions to the introduction of action. We can also trust the people to choose their own channels. The major disaster relief is humanitarian obligations, beyond the scope of the state, is related with each one of us.

       Can be sure that it is the most serious earthquake disaster in china for last 30 years, a number of cities in an instant has already razed to the ground, the scene of the disaster area known as hell on earth and must not excessive at all. As the communication and traffic were disrupted in general  in all the disaster areas, the eager people could not know more correct situation.

        But that does not mean we can only fear into inaction, and no proof that civilization is incompetent, but that the development of civilization is a never-ending process that this country is particularly necessary at this moment in the heart of civilization: Human kindness, confidence and fearless spirit.

        We are to maintain optimism. The serious default happen while deal with the disaster is unthinkable. We hope that the days of compassion, as people, rescue smoothly. We hope to speed up the rescue, and also more survivors.

        People in the disaster pledge peace in these windy rainy days, our feeling of sadness and conviction of the heart,  hope safe for our country and peple.

淡淡碎叶

万事开头难，大家来参加吧！奖励多多！礼品多多！

[ 本帖最后由 淡淡碎叶 于 2008-5-30 08:42 编辑 ]

精灵周围走

We in the edge of hell but we did not tremble
         This is a black day, all the children, all adults. . . . . All the Chinese people, are in a strong shock and sorrow.
         In this tragic day, we need to temporarily close the focus away from the vast western Yuan Wang. We will feel real, in the mountains where the barrier is the existence of the disaster areas compatriots, instead of ignoring them as usual. Under the ruins of the pale face, a pool of blood in a struggle both hands, as we circled the Morimoye ago.
We need action, through various means sending our love. The China Red Cross Society and other official channels contributions have been opened, the media also have contributions to the introduction of action. We can also trust the people to choose their own channels. The major disaster relief is humanitarian obligations, beyond the scope of the state, with each one of us related.
         Can be sure that it is China 30 years ago encountered the most serious earthquake disaster, a number of cities in an instant has already razed to the ground, the scene of the disaster area known as hell on earth and must not excessive at all. As the disaster areas of communication and traffic disruption in general, Jiaozhuo Wufaquezhi more people in the situation.
        But that does not mean we can only fear into inaction, can not prove that civilization is incompetent, but that the development of civilization is a never-ending process that this country is particularly necessary at this moment in the heart of civilization: Human kindness, confidence and fearless spirit.
        We are to maintain optimism. Ping Fu in disaster management and in a serious default is unthinkable. We hope that the days of compassion, as people, rescue smoothly. We hope to speed up the rescue, the original is also more life.
People in the disaster pledge peace in this windy rainy day, our feeling of sadness and conviction of the heart, I of the original Wu Min safely.

红头发

We nearby hell on, but we have not shivered
   This is the black day, all children, all adults. . . . . All Chinese, occupy the intense shock and sad.
   In such tragic day, we need temporary to put aside the vision from the side, looks far to the length and breadth west. We
the clear feeling, in the place which is cut off by hills will have the disaster area compatriot's existence, but ordinary
day same neglects them likely. Under the ruins the pale facial features, in the pool of blood one struggles in pairs hand,
after circling day and night in ours mind.
   We need to move, needs to send to our love through each way. The Red Cross Society of China and so on official donation
channel already opened, media management donation motion also in extrusion one after another. We may also choose the folk
channel which one trust. To the significant disaster's rescue is the humanity duty, has gone beyond the national category, is
related with our each person.
   May believe firmly that this is the most serious earthquake disaster which the Chinese for 30 years encounter, many cities
instantaneous namely have razed, is called as the living hell the disaster area scene also to have absolutely never slightly
excessively. As a result of the entire disaster area's communication and the transportation universal interrupt, the deeply
worried people are unable to know for certain more situations.
   But this does not mean that we can only fall into the fear which accomplishes nothing, cannot prove that the civilization
is incompetent, but is only proved that the civilized the development will be one forever the without limits process, proved
that this country in especially will need the civilized at this moment the core: Humanity's goodness, confidence and
dauntless spirit.
   We maintain optimistic with every effort. In the disaster processes and returns to normal presents the serious error to be
able imagine. We expected that the day has the mercy, the human has the achievement, rescues smoothly. We hope to rescue the
acceleration, original more lives also.
   Wishes in disaster's people to be safe, in this Duan Duofeng in rain's day, we by the sad sentiment, heart of the faith,
original our country I the people are safe.
没办法，太难翻译了，找了个助手，电脑翻译的，呵呵，支持楼主的活动，我也顺便学了下英语啊

淡淡碎叶

恩，借助一定的技术手段是可以接受的，希望大家踊跃参加！

Dicky

We nearby hell on, but we have not shivered
This is the black day, all children, all adults. . . . . All Chinese, occupy the intense shock and sad.
      In such tragic day, we need temporary to put aside the vision from the side, looks far to the length and breadth west. We the clear feeling, in the place which is cut off by hills will have the disaster area compatriot's existence, but ordinary day same neglects them likely. Under the ruins the pale facial features, in the pool of blood one struggles in pairs hand, after circling day and night in ours mind. we need to move, needs to send to our love through each way. The Red Cross Society of China and so on official donation channel already opened, media management donation motion also in extrusion one after another. We may also choose the folk channel which one trust. To the significant disaster's rescue is the humanity duty, has gone beyond the national category, is related with our each person.
      May believe firmly that this is the most serious earthquake disaster which the Chinese for 30 years encounter, many cities instantaneous namely have razed, is called as the living hell the disaster area scene also to have absolutely never slightly excessively. As a result of the entire disaster area's communication and the transportation universal interrupt, the deeply worried people are unable to know for certain more situations.
      But this does not mean that we can only fall into the fear which accomplishes nothing, cannot prove that the civilization is incompetent, but is only proved that the civilized the development will be one forever the without limits process, proved that this country in especially will need the civilized at this moment the core: Humanity's goodness, confidence and dauntless spirit.
       We maintain optimistic with every effort. In the disaster processes and returns to normal presents the serious error to be able imagine. We expected that the day has the mercy, the human has the achievement, rescues smoothly. We hope to rescue the acceleration, original more lives also. in the wishing disaster's people are safe, in this Duan Duofeng in rain's day, we by the sad sentiment, heart of the faith, original our country I the people are safe. 太长了，英译汉还好点。不过还是提交份..都失去意义了。

淡淡碎叶

恩，下一期，就是英译汉，其实英译汉是很难的，在信达雅皆具的情况下翻译，无论是英译汉还是汉译英都很不容易。

龙翔九天

借助翻译软件也可以啊,下次来试试